Thursday, December 20, 2007
Coma
You knew where you were at last
when you saw the place where the sky falls,
where the clouds crouch at the horizon
where an elusive crescent slowly sends
its long forgotten thoughts through the air
though no one can rebuild these writhing colours
with their new words for despair
the t.v.'s hands are tied
and there on the cold frozen grounds
below the towering black buildings
where razor winter bends the last starlight dusted smile
of the worlds that flicker under your eyelids
where love never dies
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3 comments:
there is so much atmosphere in your writing. and beauty and longing. words that reach across the room, the city, the sea... into the hearts and minds of others.
It has been too long since my last look at these hallowed pages.
I'm with "cloud of birds". Also on a slightly more mundane note, there are so many beautiful and memorable two-word combinations: razor winter is gorgeous. I also find your poems quite uplifting despite the shadow cast on them. Thanks, Adrian--this one made my day.
thank you all for such kind comments. As soon as I get a new computer I shall begin posting about 5 times a week again.. I have 2 small books worth of material but alas no machine with which to publish...
sorry..
please stay tuned
much love.
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