Thursday, November 13, 2008

When Heaven Is Deserted


don't make a sound

as tears dance through your fingers

(what should I tell him?)

we know not what to call it

when there is no feeling

but still, I needed you to know

there are still many seasons left

for us to conquer

and forever remains ours to forgive

it would have been the first time I held your hand



johno said...

Sublime. This has to be one of my favourites. Waiting for the book now.

snakedance said...

thanks so much John.
I didn't realize how much I liked it until I read it for about the tenth time. This one went through quite a few drafts which is usually quite rare...
So many in fact that there is another one that I wrote as a response....
(in answer)
hope to see you soon!